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Lost Dream

The Addicts Dream Today is the last time Today is the last time 365 days Is the lost time Until the last time When The dream is lost forever

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Manmath Dalei

Date: 8/10/2018 9:14:00 AM

Hearty welcome to Poetry Soup. Your first post is really nice and creative. Wish u nice days ahead. Keep on writing.......hugs//Manmath

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/28/2018 5:02:00 AM

Twenty nine words put together in the right way can really make the reader think, and feel. This poem is a wow for me.

Teresa Rivera
Date: 7/31/2018 11:40:00 AM

Thank you!

Lyric Man

Date: 7/27/2018 10:31:00 PM

Powerful write about the power of addiction!!

Teresa Rivera
Date: 7/31/2018 11:40:00 AM

Yes very powerful, thank you!