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Lost Angels

Have you ever felt invisible as you walk down the street Nothing but a reflection of everyone you meet Becoming nothing more than a shadow of a shadow Or even as useless as a soundless piano I don't know what happened I don't know where I went I wish I could find me I really want to vent Abuse is the one that committed the crime There isn't much left I'm almost out of time Hate has just slammed it's big fist in my face All I know for sure is that I'm losing this race I don't know what happened I don't know where I went I wish I could find me I really need to vent All my life I walked...I walked in darkness Never really knowing who I was meant to be Every night I dreamed...I dreamed of madness Never understanding why it was part of me I don't know what happened I don't know where I went I'm scared someone will find me I probably shouldn't vent 12/22/15 For the Any Poem contest by Broken Wings

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Date: 1/26/2016 10:13:00 PM
Scott, Congratulations on your winning poem. XOX - LINDA -
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Scott Williams
Date: 1/28/2016 3:43:00 AM
Thanks Linda. I appreciate you stopping by to check out my poem.
Date: 1/18/2016 8:55:00 AM
SCOTT, Congrats on your any poem win. ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/18/2016 9:46:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by and checking out my poem,SKAT.
Date: 1/17/2016 5:52:00 PM
Sad one but I enjoyed the lyrical quality of it and the message you had to impart. yes, I wish you knew Jenny too!
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Date: 1/17/2016 10:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. As always, I respect your feedback and appreciate it.
Date: 1/17/2016 8:36:00 AM
Deep, sad poem Scott, well written.
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Scott Williams
Date: 1/17/2016 10:04:00 PM
Thank you, James. I appreciate your feedback.
Date: 1/16/2016 5:29:00 PM
powerful sad write Scott congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/16/2016 10:55:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Date: 1/16/2016 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on placing in the contest. I found this to be a sad reflection of myself sometimes... Well-written and emotional poem. A 7
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Date: 1/16/2016 10:56:00 PM
Thanks a bunch Susan. I appreciate your feedback.
Date: 1/14/2016 6:44:00 AM
Scott, the dramatic phasing of your stanzas, the title isn'tmentioned in the poem but I did get why.. =`) Good luck in the contest.. =`) My poetry grew here Scott, I improved by joining poetry contests here and tried to research what others can i do to make my poems strong.. =`) Also there are others here who are so kind and helpful.. =`) i cAn help too,, Smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)
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Scott Williams
Date: 1/14/2016 11:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Olive Eloisa. Your words of encouragement mean so much to me.