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Lost and Alone

Lost and Alone Lost and alone in this once happy home, Where love and laughter rang, now a silent tome. Our candle, an ardent fire that burned so bright, Now dimly flickers, in the cold, harsh night. I see the distance in your eyes, Reflecting the echoes of love's goodbye, Emptiness in your silent stare, A longing that lingers in the air. A love that danced has lost its grace, Fading memories leave a bitter taste, Sarcasm drips from lips once sweet, A love turned sour, our hearts retreat. In passion’s veins, ice takes hold, Your touch, once warm, now a numbing cold, Isolation wraps around us tight, Loneliness now our silent plight. Our former fervent flame, now a thin wisp, A puff of smoke on a burnt-out wick. Haunting memories of our love’s past, Our smoldering ember, reduced to ash. A sonorous knell echoes through this hollowed home, Eternally cursed to haunt these halls, lost and alone. -Edward

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Date: 6/14/2024 11:48:00 AM
This is a sad story. It happens often. The rhyme that accents the haunting loneliness created a gripping tale.
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Date: 6/9/2024 1:20:00 PM
Well if shes that cold' put a blanket over the Girl Edward..It would be a start? Yet if you are Alone she must have left maybe?? Hmm..This Wasn't written at Davos by any chance? As I Find there that sort of theme there..Anyway you Need cheering up i think.? Be well look me up And give me a piece of your mind' all will be Fine.!!
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Edward Wraith
Date: 6/9/2024 1:39:00 PM
Davos appears to harbor a darker outlook than mine own. Nevertheless, fear not, my friend, for all is in well.
Date: 6/2/2024 6:17:00 PM
There's ' a longing that lingers in the air. ' It's so evident within your words. Emotions and moments from the past can create an empty feeling, indeed. Especially when you've felt isolated. Your thoughts curls softly around me and my heart. ~ Brandy
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Edward Wraith
Date: 6/2/2024 6:31:00 PM
A longing is lingering, a love is lingering, a life is lingering. Silently succumbing to the isolation. A heart grows heavy anticipating the inevitable. Doomed to relive the same dreary day, over and over again, for eternity.

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