Lost and Alone

Lost and Alone

Lost and alone in this once happy home,
Where love and laughter rang, now a silent tome.
Our candle, an ardent fire that burned so bright,
Now dimly flickers, in the cold, harsh night.

I see the distance in your eyes,
Reflecting the echoes of love's goodbye,
Emptiness in your silent stare,
A longing that lingers in the air.

A love that danced has lost its grace,
Fading memories leave a bitter taste,
Sarcasm drips from lips once sweet,
A love turned sour, our hearts retreat.

In passion’s veins, ice takes hold,
Your touch, once warm, now a numbing cold,
Isolation wraps around us tight,
Loneliness now our silent plight.

Our former fervent flame, now a thin wisp,
A puff of smoke on a burnt-out wick.
Haunting memories of our love’s past,
Our smoldering ember, reduced to ash.

A sonorous knell echoes through this hollowed home, 
Eternally cursed to haunt these halls, lost and alone.

-Edward

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 6/14/2024 11:48:00 AM
This is a sad story. It happens often. The rhyme that accents the haunting loneliness created a gripping tale.
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Date: 6/9/2024 1:20:00 PM
Well if shes that cold' put a blanket over the Girl Edward..It would be a start? Yet if you are Alone she must have left maybe?? Hmm..This Wasn't written at Davos by any chance? As I Find there that sort of theme there..Anyway you Need cheering up i think.? Be well look me up And give me a piece of your mind' all will be Fine.!!
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Edward Wraith
Date: 6/9/2024 1:39:00 PM
Davos appears to harbor a darker outlook than mine own. Nevertheless, fear not, my friend, for all is in well.
Date: 6/2/2024 6:17:00 PM
There's ' a longing that lingers in the air. ' It's so evident within your words. Emotions and moments from the past can create an empty feeling, indeed. Especially when you've felt isolated. Your thoughts curls softly around me and my heart. ~ Brandy
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Edward Wraith
Date: 6/2/2024 6:31:00 PM
A longing is lingering, a love is lingering, a life is lingering. Silently succumbing to the isolation. A heart grows heavy anticipating the inevitable. Doomed to relive the same dreary day, over and over again, for eternity.
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