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Desert sands, desolate hands scorch-ed crops, the cool rain stops I did try, I gave my all Taken from me, by alcohol.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/3/2017 8:01:00 PM
Choice of words excellent, Theme is good. Great. Loved to review this verse.Very good poem indeed. Rhetorical devices really add beauty to the poem. Review my poems 2 encourage my unique Pari Style.
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