Lost

Desert sands, desolate hands
scorch-ed crops, the cool rain stops
I did try, I gave my all
Taken from me, by alcohol.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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September 3, 2017 at 8:01 PM
Choice of words excellent, Theme is good. Great. Loved to review this verse.Very good poem indeed. Rhetorical devices really add beauty to the poem. Review my poems 2 encourage my unique Pari Style.
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