Lost

Inspired by: "Invictus" by: William Ernest Henley 

I am lost in my own despair,
My pain coursing through my veins
I thank my hope, for it is
For my unconquerable soul

I fall to the simple circumstance
I feel wet drops upon my cheek
Alone, I am weak, I must remain strong
I will hold my head high

Judging eyes sadden my soul
My eyes burn, I mustn't look away
I fight to stay true to my promise 
I shy away, alone, I truly am weak

I seek a time of glorious light,
When darkness seems to fade
The past will always haunt me 
I shall remain unafraid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nance Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 8:16 AM
I am lost in my own despair- that is the start of good poetry, the depth of that emotion empowers us to seek more. Staying strong, breaking through the weakness, well said.
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May 12, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Elizabeth, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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May 12, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Elizabeth, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.7 out of 7..........//:) hugs
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May 11, 2016 at 10:41 PM
Elizabeth, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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