Lost

You on the outside looking in but the moral of the story
Is i have no friends

Feeling lost in this cold cold world what can i say nobody 
Really cares at the end of the day

I take a drink to make the pain go away feeling numb
Feeling worthless feeling all the above

What should i do because i need to be loved

Put my thoughts on this paper so please don't judge

You ran my name through the mud had me spazing out

My mind is racing now i'm pacing and i'm blacking out

Wishing things could be different i can't take no more

I took my life now i'm walking through that other 
Door

To the ones that shot me down i'm in a better place

Every man is the same and there is no race

I'm flying high now that miseries gone

Would tell you all about it but there is no phone 



Written by: crystal jackson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Posey Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 6:05 AM
Well done, Crystal. You have the talent to draw a following here on PSoup. I look forward to reading more from your portfolio.. You write with talented ink.... Jake
Jackson Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 11:51 AM
Thank You So Much!!!!!!!!!! I appreciate the love. I really enjoy writing and I will be putting up more stuff as soon as I get a break from school. This inspires me to do more!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 18, 2013 at 5:10 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Crystal! Regards, Chris
Jackson Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 11:51 AM
Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 17, 2013 at 7:56 PM
Crystal Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Jackson Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 11:52 AM
Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 17, 2013 at 3:43 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Crystal ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Well done ! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
Jackson Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 11:52 AM
Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 16, 2013 at 4:42 PM
Hi Crystal, a deep poem, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Jackson Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 11:53 AM
Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jackson Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 4:39 PM
HELLO EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!! I PUT THIS POEM TOGETHER FOR A CLASS THAT I HAD TAKEN. MY PROFESSOR AND MY CLASSMATES LOVED IT SO MUCH I DECIDED TO POST IT AND SEE WHAT KIND OF FEED BACK I WOULD RECEIVE!!!!!!!!! I LOVE WRITING POETRY AND WILL POSTING UP SEVERAL OTHERS SHORTLY. I BASICALLY PUT MYSELF IN THE SHOES OF A DEPRESSED TEENAGER BECAUSE SO MANY PEOPLE GO THROUGH THINGS LIKE THIS. I HOPE YOU ENJOY!!!!!!!!!
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October 16, 2013 at 4:43 PM
nice to meet you.... you did well on the subject... LINDA
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