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You on the outside looking in but the moral of the story Is i have no friends Feeling lost in this cold cold world what can i say nobody Really cares at the end of the day I take a drink to make the pain go away feeling numb Feeling worthless feeling all the above What should i do because i need to be loved Put my thoughts on this paper so please don't judge You ran my name through the mud had me spazing out My mind is racing now i'm pacing and i'm blacking out Wishing things could be different i can't take no more I took my life now i'm walking through that other Door To the ones that shot me down i'm in a better place Every man is the same and there is no race I'm flying high now that miseries gone Would tell you all about it but there is no phone Written by: crystal jackson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/22/2013 6:05:00 AM
Well done, Crystal. You have the talent to draw a following here on PSoup. I look forward to reading more from your portfolio.. You write with talented ink.... Jake
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Crystal Jackson
Date: 10/23/2013 11:51:00 AM
Thank You So Much!!!!!!!!!! I appreciate the love. I really enjoy writing and I will be putting up more stuff as soon as I get a break from school. This inspires me to do more!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10/18/2013 5:10:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Crystal! Regards, Chris
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Crystal Jackson
Date: 10/23/2013 11:51:00 AM
Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10/17/2013 7:56:00 PM
Crystal Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Crystal Jackson
Date: 10/23/2013 11:52:00 AM
Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10/17/2013 3:43:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Crystal ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Well done ! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Crystal Jackson
Date: 10/23/2013 11:52:00 AM
Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10/16/2013 4:42:00 PM
Hi Crystal, a deep poem, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Crystal Jackson
Date: 10/23/2013 11:53:00 AM
Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10/16/2013 4:39:00 PM
HELLO EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!! I PUT THIS POEM TOGETHER FOR A CLASS THAT I HAD TAKEN. MY PROFESSOR AND MY CLASSMATES LOVED IT SO MUCH I DECIDED TO POST IT AND SEE WHAT KIND OF FEED BACK I WOULD RECEIVE!!!!!!!!! I LOVE WRITING POETRY AND WILL POSTING UP SEVERAL OTHERS SHORTLY. I BASICALLY PUT MYSELF IN THE SHOES OF A DEPRESSED TEENAGER BECAUSE SO MANY PEOPLE GO THROUGH THINGS LIKE THIS. I HOPE YOU ENJOY!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 10/16/2013 4:43:00 PM
nice to meet you.... you did well on the subject... LINDA

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