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I am here,
You are here,
Where are we?

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Jake Ponce

Date: 5/5/2014 8:57:00 PM

I have times when I'm like this. I absolutely have no clue. This poem, in its simplicity, captures such complex circumstances in our lives.

John Posey
Date: 5/8/2014 2:09:00 PM

Thanks, Jake..... your comments hold depth not usually found in young poets.... I appreciate your comments and will match your comments one to one...(not really counting)..... Keep posting..... you are developing a nice following......Regards...... Jake

Jeanette Woods

Date: 11/2/2013 7:16:00 PM

I really enjoyed this. So meaningful, in so few words, nicely done!

John Posey
Date: 11/3/2013 3:41:00 AM

Thank you, dear friend... Your visit is appreciated... I will read more of your posts later.... Jake

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/10/2013 3:37:00 PM

You give us so much to think about with these few simple words...I was lost for awhile, but I think I have found where I belong...very interesting poem, wonderful work!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/1/2013 5:28:00 AM

most whimsical Jake simple to the point love it Shadow x smiles Ty for visiting my work

Edward Orozco

Date: 6/14/2013 10:13:00 PM

Simple and to point. Well done!- Edward

Debbie Knapp

Date: 6/4/2013 5:55:00 PM

That means more than a lot of things.. Just being together is what most of us want!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/26/2013 9:12:00 AM

Wow, well said! I absolutely loved the way you worded this! A closeness in proximity... but what about your hearts and minds? One of the best senryu I've ever read... I love it's straightforwardness... faving!

John Posey
Date: 5/26/2013 9:19:00 AM

You're OK!!! Jake

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/23/2013 12:29:00 PM

- Yes, where are we??????? - I am here and you are there..... nevertheless the same place. - Well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

John Posey
Date: 5/23/2013 12:35:00 PM

Where to Now?

Donna Jones

Date: 5/23/2013 11:39:00 AM

At least together! Nice ponderer.....

John Posey
Date: 5/23/2013 11:46:00 AM

Drink to that!!(HIC}

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/23/2013 11:26:00 AM

sorry don't know lol, like it xx

John Posey
Date: 5/23/2013 11:32:00 AM

Who are you?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/22/2013 3:18:00 PM

Who knows?..God for sure..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sorry my work about the old school brought melancoly memories..A school that I went to as a young child has been turned into a nursing home..My grandson's dad is in it and also his cousin both have Huntington's Disease..My grandson's dad is only 49 years old..He probably won't be alive much longer..His great grandmother and her sister lived in that area and went to school there both of the had the illness also.Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/22/2013 3:20:00 PM

Now their decendent who lived in another county is there in the former school which now is a nursing home..Hence the full school.Sara

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