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She screams in anger. She is in danger. Left totaly alone, she is now afraid of the unknown. Death calls out to her Everyday she takes a step furthur. She is angry, she is lost. She gives up her mind, but with a cost. A life to give, A soul to free, Death looks upon her with greed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/2/2011 2:36:00 PM
Creative and meangiful thoughts on death, amanda
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:52:00 PM
Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Amanda. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:11:00 PM
This is an interesting poem. There is a sadness and loneliness in the lines. Your readers may wish to know what is she taking a step further into,. Perhaps you could add a line. "Every day she takes a step further" Further into the unknown" I like what is going on here. It has a dark mystery to it. Take care and keep writing. Jancarl
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