Lost

help me
please
i cannot
find
myself

i've lost
my soul
i'm all
alone
i begged
to god
to help

but he never answered.
i have been forsaken.
God is Dead to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palhegyi Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 3:31 PM
Read my poem "By a Thread" All things have a way of working out if you tough it out.
Fox Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 2:02 PM
Well done ,relax and enjoy ! Take pride in your discovery,he never was there in the first place !! You are now free to think for yourself, there are lots of people who will help !!
A   Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 1:43 PM
wow,, this one is all sorts of down,, this person has lost faith and needs someone there for them..P.D.
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