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~I am in the light, the shadows are intriguing, should i step towards them? ~Step into the dark, i am lost and afraid now, someone please save me. ~I remember it, the soft white wings that held me, Ive found them again! ~I see someone there, in the dark where i once was, i must help them see...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/17/2010 2:08:00 AM
Excellent write Jordyn - Captured rather nicely if I may say - Thanks for a fab share -:)
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Date: 3/16/2010 8:38:00 PM
just had to add one more observation.... you very much allow the reader to image the emotional scenery as it pertains to the readers own life (in this case mine!) in my world, this means good poetry! jmg
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Date: 3/16/2010 8:34:00 PM
welcome to the soup! Jordyn! haiku 3 is my fav! have never twice faved new post before! cool indeed! ROCK ON! love, jamesy
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Jordyn Thompson
Date: 3/20/2012 11:50:00 AM
ahh, thank you! that makes me feel special indeed! thank you again! love love love, jordyn
Date: 3/16/2010 8:04:00 PM
i love your last line. keep writing(: hope the thoughts from your mind grow with the inspiration of being here. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/16/2010 8:03:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight...luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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