Jordyn Thompson Poet Haiku

Lost

~I am in the light, the shadows are intriguing, should i step towards them? 

~Step into the dark, i am lost and afraid now, someone please save me.

~I remember it, the soft white wings that held me, Ive found them again!

~I see someone there, in the dark where i once was, i must help them see...

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Bathsheba Bathsheba March 17, 2010 at 2:08 AM Excellent write Jordyn - Captured rather nicely if I may say - Thanks for a fab share -:)

James Marshall Goff March 16, 2010 at 8:38 PM just had to add one more observation.... you very much allow the reader to image the emotional scenery as it pertains to the readers own life (in this case mine!) in my world, this means good poetry! jmg

James Marshall Goff March 16, 2010 at 8:34 PM welcome to the soup! Jordyn! haiku 3 is my fav! have never twice faved new post before! cool indeed! ROCK ON! love, jamesy Jordyn Thompson March 20, 2012 at 11:50 AM ahh, thank you! that makes me feel special indeed! thank you again! love love love, jordyn

Lynette Chachere March 16, 2010 at 8:04 PM i love your last line. keep writing(: hope the thoughts from your mind grow with the inspiration of being here. -Always&Forever Lynette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 16, 2010 at 8:03 PM Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight...luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..