Brittany Martin Poet I do not know?

Lost

I never know the count-
I never know my thoughts.
I never felt the air so dense,
in the days spent with sulk.
The world is very gray,
when you loose the sight of life.
The days just sort of drown you
when you never know what to do.

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Judy Riley December 12, 2009 at 11:35 AM Just the hum drum of a cloudy day, well put my fellow poet. The mood is flowing the image strong. Good work. I would sugest to read in the "Forms of poetry section uptop, you can learn alot from it. Good work. Judy Riley