Lost

Where does this road go? Why am I here? Everything unfamiliar I think I'm lost Chaos all over Comfort a distant memory Pain is all I find

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Anonymous Norman

Date: 12/7/2009 11:35:00 AM

charmaine's comment is true, i was told this yesterday "imagine your in a forest where the tree's are so dense that no light penetrates its foliage, there is a golden oblisque somewhere and each tree is a lie, so start cutting away at the lies, untill your golden oblisque of truth is found." Kindest regards

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/4/2009 2:45:00 PM

R--If you're lost,dont worry,in our lost moments is when we find ourselves..Comfort a distant memory,pain is all i find,, Search well and im sure you ll find much comfort here indeed..Charma:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/4/2009 10:10:00 AM

Hey Ra R, Keep writing and sharing- even if it is sad we at PS still want to hear and share. Good write!