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Lost

the water deep, cold i’m in way over my head flailing, sinking, lost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/12/2009 4:19:00 AM
I know the feeling very well my friend...this haiku captures the sinking, overwhelming feelings very well.
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Date: 8/12/2009 3:47:00 AM
Nicely descriptive Haiku,J.B.. Sara
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