Lost

the water deep, cold
i’m in way over my head
flailing, sinking, lost
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Higgins Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 4:19 AM
I know the feeling very well my friend...this haiku captures the sinking, overwhelming feelings very well.
Kendrick Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 3:47 AM
Nicely descriptive Haiku,J.B.. Sara
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