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Inside of myself, I wander, lost, in a sea, of unforgiving thought, pain, and misery, to lose all sight, and focus, on a tiny glimpse of reality, it is the key, to what I really need, but just then, I am shut down, pressed back into the ground, uncertain if I shall ever be found.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/28/2016 11:23:00 PM
Brittany Bigelow, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/11/2015 10:58:00 AM
Brittany, enjoyed reading today.... SKAT
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Date: 7/14/2009 10:26:00 AM
Thank you Moses, and yes it is me that I am talking about, I'm quite a complicated person emotionally speaking. I do appreciate your concern, but it's just the inner me that I must cherish and embrace. :)
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Date: 7/13/2009 9:10:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Brittany, but so sad, I hope not about yourself. If so don't let your mind pull you down like that. You have a heart full of the power of God's love to draw from. Sincere Godly love Moses
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