Lost

Inside of myself, 

I wander, 

lost, 

in a sea, 

of unforgiving thought, 

pain, 

and misery, 

to lose all sight, 

and focus, 

on a tiny glimpse of reality, 

it is the key, 

to what I really need, 

but just then, 

I am shut down, 

pressed back into the ground, 

uncertain if I shall ever be found.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 28, 2016 at 11:23 PM
Brittany Bigelow, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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August 11, 2015 at 10:58 AM
Brittany, enjoyed reading today.... SKAT
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July 14, 2009 at 10:26 AM
Thank you Moses, and yes it is me that I am talking about, I'm quite a complicated person emotionally speaking. I do appreciate your concern, but it's just the inner me that I must cherish and embrace. :)
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July 13, 2009 at 9:10 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Brittany, but so sad, I hope not about yourself. If so don't let your mind pull you down like that. You have a heart full of the power of God's love to draw from. Sincere Godly love Moses
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