Lost

I lost you
somewhere
in the palm trees.
on the sandy beaches
in the hot calming sun
amphibian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Meadows Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 5:09 PM
this poems really good
Anish Avatar
June 24, 2009 at 12:29 PM
I enjoyed the poem. But what do you mean by anphibian? If you meant the animal it would be "ampibian". Let me know what you meant. Yours Matthew Anish
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