Lost***

Im in a dark hole 
with nothing around
just the cold 
i was looking for a light
above but i can't seem to see like i planned to 
all i was  thinking my past  where it all stacked 
up above my head and i wanted to my future 
like i planned and then right before my eyes the dark 
came into light then i prayed more and hell was getting mad the 
thought they could defeat me but they didn't because my god above
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Montgomery Avatar
January 14, 2009 at 8:30 AM
Great poem! :)
Brown Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I hope to read more poetry from you. Love, Carol
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