Lost

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She was forced to live a life that was never her own trapped in this body and reduced to a wraith lost and ridiculed, abandoned in a world unknown far from home with only a trace left of her faith looking for answers, she sits down in a church pew so many, pass judgement with looks that condemn do the needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few? Is she an abomination? Do you not love her like you love them? Why do so many, feel entitled and have to hate? Did you not create and die for us all? Why can’t we just show love and not berate? Please give this girl strength, and don’t let her fall we all have free will and choose how we treat each other my door is always open and I will do my part I accept this child for who she is, for I am her brother She has my unconditional love straight from the heart December 19,2020 A Rhyme Story-Poem With Eyes On Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/24/2020 10:50:00 AM

Ah Mark, you touched my heart here, if only more people could realize that love means unconditional embrace , then what a wonderful world this would be. So many are afraid of what they don't understand, and fear causes hate and refusal. Thank you for sharing your talented pen, God bless you, always,

Mark Koplin
Date: 12/25/2020 2:43:00 AM

Thank you Rose! Merry Christmas and God bless you!

Jenna Logan

Date: 12/19/2020 9:33:00 AM

Emotionally compelling, Mark.

Mark Koplin
Date: 12/22/2020 10:58:00 AM

Thanks Jenna!