Loss

Tears drown my thoughts        As your soul searches the heavens                                        12/4/2013

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Andrea Dietrich

March 23, 2014 at 10:50 AM

Richard. Do you have new poems you can post? I just noticed this one is way back in December. but it DID win a new contest so I'm here again to say BIG congrats to you, my friend.

Skat A

March 15, 2014 at 10:14 AM

Richard .. Congratulations with your one amazing line....~SKAT~

Richard Ferry

March 31, 2014 at 11:23 PM

hello skat....one amazing line is all it should take...thanks

Andrea Dietrich

March 10, 2014 at 5:04 PM

richard, long time no see!!! this kind of contest and line going across is right up your alley. VERY nicely done. Congrats for your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 10, 2014 at 4:49 PM

- One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Richard ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Ferry

March 31, 2014 at 11:24 PM

thanks anne

Andrea Dietrich

December 10, 2013 at 12:40 AM

WOW, this is a good one, Richard. I think Broken wings should love this one. thanks for your comment on my wish poem. I was just off to bed and saw it come in so I wanted to see your little poem and get off here now!

Richard Ferry

December 10, 2013 at 12:43 AM

goodnight and thanks