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Loss

Loss Moon seeds blow away; Fern fronds fall into the pond, My future is gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/25/2010 2:08:00 PM
Good use of imagery for an interesting perspecitive. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Keep on writing!! Karen
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Date: 5/25/2010 6:59:00 AM
This is an excellent haiku. I like your touch of alliteration in the second line. Keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 5/25/2010 2:48:00 AM
A nice haiku with good images. enjoyed it
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