Loss

Loss

Moon seeds blow away;
Fern fronds fall into the pond,
My future is gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 25, 2010 at 2:08 PM
Good use of imagery for an interesting perspecitive. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Keep on writing!! Karen
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May 25, 2010 at 6:59 AM
This is an excellent haiku. I like your touch of alliteration in the second line. Keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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May 25, 2010 at 2:48 AM
A nice haiku with good images. enjoyed it
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