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Losing You

I feel like I am losing you Sorry to be blunt This poem; not a cry for help or Attention grabbing stunt I know you are no possession And even if you were I have no claim, no stake in you I know that you'll concur And yet I feel quite vacant Like a part of you has left Not anxious, just uncertain This feeling in my chest I don't know how to fix this Not wanting to impose I have to be myself I guess Not in someone else's clothes So there. I said it. I'm hoping you don't mind It's just this insecurity That's less than cruel; unkind. Whenever I get close to you Your presence makes me soar It's just the way the story goes Repeats itself. Once more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/3/2024 8:37:00 AM
Delivered with a sense of despair, but an inkling of hope. Exceptionally well written, and, as for most exceptional writers, their wit is honed from experience...and, thanks for stopping by site this morning!
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Cynthia Vipond
Date: 3/3/2024 9:09:00 AM
Hey Mark. Thank you, Best Cindy
Date: 3/2/2024 7:18:00 PM
I find this poem intriguing. The rhyme is perfect to my ears. It's difficult to be left alone.
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Cynthia Vipond
Date: 3/2/2024 11:32:00 PM
Bless you, Hilda dear. Best, Cindyx

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