Michael Degenhardt Poet Rhyme

Losing Weight

Secrets do reveal themselves
They never stay suppressed
Many times just coming out
So often when not best
Trying to keep’em deep inside
Becomes a heavy load
So they feel they must come out
Is why so often they explode

But then it is so very clear
When all the secrets air
The people who deserve to know
Reveal they just don’t care
The weight on shoulders goes away
The truth then sets you free
Thank God for secrets coming out
They then just let you be

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Brian Strand June 13, 2008 at 1:01 AM Neat title Michael like nectar on a flower id draws the reader in.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Marycile Beer June 12, 2008 at 6:07 PM Now this is a diet I can handle, Michael. I feared you were going to go for the other one. Good Work, God Bless, Cile

Crystal Seals June 12, 2008 at 1:45 PM Hello Michael !thank you for your comments.Being set free is something that is priceless like a piece a mind. I really enjoyed the flow of your words.Issues can weight our spiritman down. B BLESS Crystal

Katherine Stella June 12, 2008 at 7:34 AM not what I thought very cleverly written my friend I love to lose this kind of weight off shoulders quite often but me scattered brain and sometimes forget about it this turned out great thanks for sharing keep sheding those pounds lol hugs dear friend to you and family