Losing Them

Losing someone you care about 
Out of the blue everything u had is gone 
Now I wonder how my life will be without you 
Everything we had together is gone for now 
Letting yesterday stay in my head and keep those memories 
why did u have to go, you were still so young
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bateman Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 10:49 AM
The person who was in this poem lost a family member and he was young at age
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June 21, 2010 at 11:15 AM
k, well. i couldnt tell what was so young but other than tht. great job sis. good job with the light poetry. Giggles
Bathsheba Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 7:47 AM
Very sad write Heather - Thankyou for sharing such a heartfelt write -:)
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