Titus Loh Poet I do not know?

Losing the Way

Walking the straight path,
Tracks aligned, perfect symmetry.
Lifeless, soulless,
Limping in reality.

As an empty canister,
In the heart of a gale;
Swayed by every nudge, 
Trashed by every gush.

Within, that cunning confidence,
Deceiving blissfully. 
That senseless fool,
Believing indefinitely. 

Step by step
The soul disconnects.
This hollow frame,
Dissolving, decaying…losing the way.

-Titus Loh-

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Beata Agustin November 3, 2024 at 6:30 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 26, 2016 at 6:00 PM Titus Loh, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A January 4, 2016 at 2:47 PM Titus, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT** Titus Loh January 4, 2016 at 6:27 PM Dear SKAT, thanks for your kind comment, appreciate it. Wishing you a Happy New Year!

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2012 at 6:38 AM Early morning reading to get the mind buzzing. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Titus. Have a fabulous weekend and I hope to see more of your poetry when I get back to the Soup Monday. Usually pretty busy on the weekends with family so don't get to read much. Love, Carol Titus Loh February 27, 2012 at 10:36 PM Glad it made your morning better and not worse! Thanks Carol.