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Losing the Way

Riding stormy winds to the past To find out how we lost our way How long did the great ones last Mayans left their pyramids where trees sway We are left to ponder the whys As vines constrict their ruins Incas left their calling card in the mountains A vast empire now left to the clouds Winds take me to the Roman empire They were great indeed but now their ruins decay Deserted coliseums tell the story As they crumbled under wars and strife The winds return me to the present It journeyed on, it did not stay But I heard it whisper before it left; 'Once again they've lost the way'! 8-17-2022

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Date: 8/18/2022 7:18:00 PM
We cannot change the past, however, we can change the present and that will change the future. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 8/18/2022 6:14:00 PM
Oh this excellent Joseph, Will our modern democratic way of life be next? i often wonder. Love the poetry, the theme, and the the though behind the pen.
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Date: 8/18/2022 10:58:00 AM
Wow. Excellent poem Joseph. Beautifully written, thought provoking. Well done. A Fave :)
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Date: 8/17/2022 2:27:00 PM
The ending line spells the essence of your poem, Joseph. I hear you message.
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Date: 8/17/2022 9:17:00 AM
We are human therefore we tend to lose our way, sidestepping and running for all that glitters and promises, sacrifices our most treasured possession, ourselves, may we realize that healing is our only chance here, so we don't lose our way again, thank you for this precious poem Joseph, I really read it to its depth and breath.
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Date: 8/17/2022 8:22:00 AM
Oh Joseph this is just lovely…the last two lines especially. If only ruins could really speak…imagine the stories they could tell! Debx
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