Losing Hope

There's always room for more I'm never full I'm never satisfied My appetite has evolved An appetite for destruction Self destruction Carry on, carry on The struggles from within Pushing and pushing and pushing Pulling and pulling and pulling No balance Constantly in motion Going down, man down I hear the pleas of for me to get up To keep going It gets better Oh how easy it sounds I want to change, I need to change Can you spare some change

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2015 6:26:00 PM

This is deep Adam, change is what is needed on all ends. WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 10/25/2015 3:07:00 PM

I like the double meaning Adam:) Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT