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Losing Game

I thought that I was in control and my mind dominated my heart but I can see that wasn't true and should have from the start there's nothing for a future there's nothing that never was a realm of intangible aspects your heart's not capable of I should have seen the truth it was written plain on the wall a dark path of misdirection for a heart that was enthralled do what's right for you and I will do the same the wounds will heal eventually I'm quitting this losing game

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Date: 11/12/2009 4:30:00 PM
I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/12/2009 7:34:00 AM
I love that you threw the emotion out there, immediately. I think this poem has an element of honesty and rich depth-that's actually hard to come by nowadays, without the thought feeling forced. Perfect piece for every reader to relate to in some aspect, as well! Really enjoy this.
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