Loseing Love

The lose of someone close to me,
Crying that day , no sign of glee,

Knocking down the door, seeing him,
Running through the yard, holding him,

Oh the tears that run down my face,
They're like a never ending race,

Seeing the life leave his sight,
My brain scrambled, this is not right!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 24, 2010 at 9:14 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Chelsea. Thank you for sharing it. Hoping you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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