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Los Marbles

polishing pieces
                               fragments of a broken brain

                                       spinning poetry







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Eric Ashford

September 17, 2019 at 11:56 AM

Nice one, and so true!

Quoth Theraven

September 15, 2019 at 10:10 PM

Maureen, Poetry conscious..,not condescending. A truly gifted set of marbles. -Richard

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 16, 2019 at 7:41 AM

Thank you my friend. Truly. xomo

Indiana Shaw

September 6, 2019 at 3:13 AM

You never fail to Amaze Maureen . . . ; )

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 6, 2019 at 8:36 AM

I amaze myself ;p

Ann Foster

August 26, 2019 at 2:20 AM

Oh my, I was thinking about the glass marbles you play. Lost your marbles and Peter Pan... Lost boys... All this from your write. You had all those thoughts for me...waiting... wonderful... Excellent... Ann

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 26, 2019 at 9:16 AM

Thank you Ann! Less is mo ;), xomo!

Caren Krutsinger

August 23, 2019 at 2:13 AM

I think this should have been POTD.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 23, 2019 at 7:37 AM

HUGS <3

M. L. Kiser

August 22, 2019 at 1:24 PM

Had to fave, that sum's it all up nicely.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 22, 2019 at 6:24 PM

Tee hee ;), Thank you so much M.L.! xomo

Timothy Mcguire

August 21, 2019 at 9:53 PM

Intriguing concept "polishing pieces of a broken brain" Love it. Made me stop and think. Thanks for engaging my brain!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 23, 2019 at 2:22 PM

...hopefully comfortably ;),

Timothy Mcguire

August 22, 2019 at 5:42 PM

I know my brain has been numb for years! ;)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 22, 2019 at 7:22 AM

Thank you Tim! It's how I roll ;), Did you know, the brain is the only part of your body that will not tell you it is broken. This past year has been a fascinating journey of discovery. Hugs! xomo

Gershon Wolf

August 21, 2019 at 9:07 PM

Never fear: 'Los marbles' preceded 'Los Angeles.' :) gw

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 22, 2019 at 7:11 AM

"The" Marbles, have been found... Stuck in the strangest of places ;), Hugs! xomo <3

Chris Green

August 21, 2019 at 3:43 PM

Definitely relatable...to me.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 22, 2019 at 7:09 AM

I hope you relate more to the polishing and spinning than having a broken brain <3 thank you my friend, xomo

Elizabeth Kinch

August 21, 2019 at 2:27 PM

Very clever!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 22, 2019 at 7:07 AM

Thank you Elizabeth! :) xomo

Arturo Michael

August 21, 2019 at 10:00 AM

That is certainly the way to light up the scene...keep spinning the words...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 21, 2019 at 10:03 AM

Hugs and Thank You Arturo! :), xomo!

Eric Ashford

August 21, 2019 at 7:50 AM

Ha! This is so clever and darn funny Maureen. It's how I do it!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 21, 2019 at 9:01 AM

Giggles ;), I get poked for always writing short, I polish and polish till I find just the words that shine, just how my narly noggin rolls. (mine's broken from too many concussions) xomo!

Jeff Connelly

August 21, 2019 at 7:15 AM

I used to play quite a bit. Get my bonker out; my favorite cat's eye, and steely. But I always disliked playing keepers; never wanting to lose my marbles. Wait a minute... I've already lost a few Maureen.

Jeff Connelly

August 21, 2019 at 1:27 PM

Yes, I've dropped quite a few along the way. Your poetry is my doctor Maureen. Thank you.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 21, 2019 at 8:14 AM

My ruby bonker was my favourite. This past year has been all about finding my lost marbles ;), xomo!