Lord

"Lord", I know your laws
my life, you see my flaws
I can't erase my sins
everyday it lives within

when I do good things
the bad is still there, it hangs
it keeps me from happiness
hoping for forgiveness

I've tried and prayed
I feel it maybe too late

this world has made me realize
it needs you for paradise
happiness never lasts long
misery always prolongs

I'm not a pope, nun, nor angel
I hunger for your world
to be free from evil
waiting for heaven to prevail

like most in life, ive failed
odds of eternal forever
seems to me maybe never

perhaps I can't live my real life
until I passed through that light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/7/2011 8:20:00 AM
Amen. Its like this poem was written for me, for their was the time i saw the laws and lived through the laws and what a burden i carried, for i was always sinning, in thought in action, i mean sin sprang up to life and in me produced every covetous desire of going against the law. But when i came to realize how POWERFUL and SWEET is the grace of CHRIST. I am a totally different person because i saw the light. I love you, Jenn for sharing this word. Gidds
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Date: 2/8/2011 7:17:00 AM
aww a great poem, we are forgiven of our sisn, when jesus died on the cross and rose again, we died with him our past present and future sins, how awesome was that he did for us. it's never to late, God promises that when our sins may be red as crimson he willw ash us whiter than snow, God bless from diane thanks for your kind comments
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:55:00 AM
this is a real life but just a visit to the planet earth. and listen. just for talking to Him You are saved. because the words are"he that believith" so just keep growing. and watch those mistakes that they don't ruin your whole life. john
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Date: 12/2/2010 4:21:00 AM
i love this i can totally relate 2 it i been feeling like this
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Date: 11/29/2010 7:09:00 AM
A well deserved featured poem you have here Jennifer. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/25/2010 3:38:00 PM
Great one that is a testimony of your faith..Sara
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Date: 11/24/2010 4:14:00 PM
Smile ~ This amazingly voiced poe from ones soul causes myself to consider the priceless life upon a cross next to "The Son of Man; 'Christ the Lord'" &, amid that last breath he found paradise promised so, Never give up my dear just trust, Pray & turn; Never looking back; fighting a good fight &, "Believe!!!" ~ "Beautiful Painting; A Fave" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Holiday My Dear;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 11/24/2010 10:25:00 AM
Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Jennifer. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/24/2010 7:05:00 AM
Jennifer, truly a blessed poem,, one can relate to the honest words and thoughts in your dear poem.. The light is the brighter ways,, but hopefully than all of our flaws will stay behind in this failed life,..p.d.
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