Loosing It All

looking for love in all the wrong areas 
loosing her way, her faith her love her everything
She wants some answers 
she wants to know why

Why are things so hard
why do i always fall down 
i want to take control of things so i can make things better
loosing control and not caring about myself

realising in the middle of it all 
my value, love and impact
i can make a difference 
and change the world
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 10, 2010 at 7:24 PM
welcome to poetry soup!! enjoyed reading your work! stop by and read my poems if possible.
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