Lakisa Battie Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Loosing It

< Early morning,

   Its rainy and dark,

   Quit dull,

   Cloudy and gray,

   Emotions flowing not,

   So dim and sadden,

   Stuck in a zone,

   Feeling all alone,

   Suddenly blacken,

   Now dressed in lace,

   And black satin,

   Emotions flowing all over,

   Yet still lost,

   Dazed and amazed,

   Felt crushed pancake flatten......>

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Carol Sunshine Brown May 20, 2011 at 6:35 AM What a beautiful morning. The sun is finally shining, the birds are singing, and I am sharing my day with you reading your wonderful poetry. I hope you have a great weekend Lakisa. Love, Carol Lakisa Battie May 20, 2011 at 9:40 AM Really it sound pretty out, where u are... Well today appears to be a darken day maybe rain is coming... It want stop the flow of my pen caressing paper... Thanks hun, and u take care and have a blessed weekend yourself... Sincerely Lakisa,

Poet Destroyer A May 19, 2011 at 10:23 PM Lakissa, a deep poem,, hope they are just poetry emotions... but, still it is very much enjoyed,..p.d. Lakisa Battie May 19, 2011 at 10:42 PM Just a write that came to me and I worked hard on that and it jus feel great... Thanks