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Loosing a Child

It hurts very much, When the one's you love, Are ripped from your very life, It makes you feel as if, You are not up to being, The person you should be, In this dreary everyday world, That can be so cruel. So, think about how your life, Is running it's very course, And what changes you need to make' To better your life, In order to see the happiness, Of keeping the beautiful thing, You have created, And brought into this very world, So, you can keep this child, Close to you in your life, And watch it grow, To bond with them each and everyday, So, the child will never grow up, knowing someone else, As Mom and Dad, Pushing you away from their life, Till the day, You will be totally gone, From their hearts and minds, Which is the sign of disaster all the way, For it will be the hurt of a lifetime.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/29/2013 12:08:00 PM
Very nice poem.
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