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Loosening

evening’s quiet breath~ a single gull skims the tide day loosens its hold
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Gauthier Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 1:05 PM
delightful ~
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 7:23 PM
The 3rd line is very effective, esp. given how the claws loosen too. Nice, Gershon
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