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Loosen Someone Close

When you loose, Someone close to you, It tears your world apart, You wonder if you had said, All the things you needed, To say to them, When they were still, Around in your life, Before you had lost them, In whatever way they went, The pain will still be there, But you know that in many ways, Their happiness is so important, And this is what makes things, A little easier to deal with, As the time goes by, Cause true happiness, Comes from within, And whether they are with you, Or someone or someplace else, We all know with time, That those we have loved, Will be in our lives again, In the paradise of Heaven, Where there is nothing more, Than le, peace, and harmony, And no mor suffring, And no more pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/13/2014 5:52:00 PM
this reminds me of the song 'the living years' by Mike and the Mechanics - too late to think of things we should have said when the person was alive. third line from the bottom should it say love and more needs an e on it next line. hugs Jan xxx
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