Loose Threads Run - In Time Unpick

fortune teller knits a future ... time pulls at loose threads unraveling
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Roper Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 6:33 PM
Well done, John. Congratulations on your 1 liner poem . Hugs Eve ~`*
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 6:27 PM
ohhh, that is a really cool metaphor. WELL DONE!!! And congrats
Anderson Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Thanks for the comments - greatly appreciated!
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:51 PM
- Congratulations John, on your great second place in the contest - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Congrats, John. Great monoku.
One Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Great one liner John... Congratulations on your placement in the cliche monoku contest..
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