Loose Leaf

Dangling from a branch,
Being strummed by the soft breeze;
Tenacious defeat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Williams Avatar
May 2, 2009 at 10:38 AM
Perfect !!
Winter Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 7:06 AM
Raul, thanks for your thoughtful congrats. Been off the soup this past week and I am sorry to have missed your latest poems. Hope to be back soon. Have a beautiful weekend. Love, Shar
Golden Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 10:51 AM
Raul, I'm loving your many beautiful Haiku poems. Thanks for your kind comments. Donna
Neese Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 7:21 AM
sounds good raul thank you for your comment
Kelly Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 1:02 AM
Superb Haiku , Raul . One of your very best ...
Devonshire Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:38 PM
Great image of a leaf "Being strummed by the soft breeze." Very nice, Raul!
Martin Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:08 PM
The last line is powerfully stressed,"Tenacious defeat" superb
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