Loose Leaf

Dangling from a branch, Being strummed by the soft breeze; Tenacious defeat.

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Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 5/2/2009 10:38:00 AM

Perfect !!

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/1/2009 7:06:00 AM

Raul, thanks for your thoughtful congrats. Been off the soup this past week and I am sorry to have missed your latest poems. Hope to be back soon. Have a beautiful weekend. Love, Shar

Donna Golden

Date: 4/30/2009 10:51:00 AM

Raul, I'm loving your many beautiful Haiku poems. Thanks for your kind comments. Donna

Walker Neese

Date: 4/28/2009 7:21:00 AM

sounds good raul thank you for your comment

Sean Kelly

Date: 4/28/2009 1:02:00 AM

Superb Haiku , Raul . One of your very best ...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/27/2009 10:38:00 PM

Great image of a leaf "Being strummed by the soft breeze." Very nice, Raul!

Tyler Martin

Date: 4/27/2009 10:08:00 PM

The last line is powerfully stressed,"Tenacious defeat" superb