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Looped of Love

Looped of love Cast upon a sea of symphonic scent Cashmere soft and storm cloud kissed Ventures forth on fingered strings Spent alone in shuttered mist “Curtains drawn in crayon colors…stitched on gold locket seams” Worn of worries, frayed edges weave Reaching deep into heart felt fear Bland the noise, served in muted tones Staring off to nowhere…near “Tears now fill thy cup…once overflowing in melodic dreams” Broken desires, a tangled spun web Knotted by a lingering memory’s hold Skin still warm of tanned defiance Fractures locked out in the cold “Heaved in piles of shoveled excess…soon to be forgotten silent on the street” Music floods into porous caverns Echoing a fragrant caring song On syncopated bar chord promises To hold you with arms forever strong “And I play for you in the key of my heart…looped of love in constant repeat”

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Darren White

Date: 1/31/2017 4:16:00 AM

Oh! The form is what I like to use, and often use. Only the way you have written this is diferent and I like much! And slowly, slowy my friend you lead us to your music, can't wait ;)

Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2017 8:23:00 AM

Thanks so very much Darren, once again for your kindness. I'm still thinking about the music side...we'll see.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/30/2017 2:33:00 PM

you sing a lovely, mellow song that enchants this page, chris!..huggs

Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2017 3:38:00 PM

Thanks so very much Nette for your kind thoughts

Christy Stover

Date: 1/30/2017 2:25:00 PM

Very eloquent expression of passionate desires and profound heartache. Beautiful poem, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2017 3:38:00 PM

Thanks so very much Christy, I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/30/2017 1:48:00 PM

- Feeling like lost dreams and disappointment in this beautiful poem, Chris ..... Illusjonenene that burst a sad facts - "What we have once enjoyed we can never lose - All that we love deeply becomes a part of us" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2017 3:37:00 PM

Thanks so very much my friend. Without memories, I'm not sure anything would be worthwhile. Thanks so much fro stopping by and leaving such kind words.