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Looking To the Pink Sky

When I look to the pink sky I see eternity I see forever And someday whispering to me Reflecting on the gray future Ignoring the past Waiting to see What the cold tomorrows will bring Yesterdays are never Today is always So I see someday as a quest That will never begin Moving forward Never looking ahead Closing my eyes Dreaming of what is dead Looking inside To the depths of my red soul Hearing the bitter wind blow As my forever dreams turn black instead gold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/29/2010 6:42:00 AM
i love it ..we have all felt that in one way ...really liked that ...x sarah thanks for my commenting on mine x
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Date: 5/28/2010 11:33:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us Jodie. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/28/2010 1:48:00 AM
Smile, "Wow!" ~ What an absolutely splendid reflection perhaps within oneself about, the recognition of the darkness which accompanies hopelessness in regards to having deadened dreams....Smile, "You," are going to be a very good writer dear; that's, my prophecy for you! Smile, "Much Warmth To You & Yours Loves, John! ~ "Bye":)
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Date: 5/27/2010 11:00:00 PM
oh, it sounded kind of hopeful and then became a sad one!! This has a very nice flow and is one to make one pause and refliect. Beautiful images. LUv, Andrea
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