Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

Looking To the Heavens

Just a victim of the system,
And left Star incensed
Effervescent Moon of crescent
Comets crashing, craters hence
Planets positions, Sun's collision
Constellations form a Sign
And give me such a clearer vision-
A heightened sense of Mind

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Robin Davis November 26, 2013 at 8:16 AM Chan This is unique and gets the reader thinking about the message you are trying to capture in these words. But don't make me think too much. My mind will shut down. LOL Thanks for the sweet and caring comment on my Staying And Repaying poem. Love and Hugs Sweet Pea Just That Archaic Poet November 27, 2013 at 6:21 AM lol thanks for the review, Sweet Pea <3

Kelly Deschler September 12, 2013 at 12:37 PM Just beautiful! This poem gives the reader much to ponder. Amazing flow to your words, once again! Nicely done! Just That Archaic Poet September 12, 2013 at 4:16 PM Again, a mere "thank you" is insufficient to articulate my appreciation of your review. It warms my heart :)