Looking Out Tonight

And the clouds roll in
Deep and dark as sin
And Thor his anvil smashed
The feared lightning flashed

Rolling around the hills
The liquid content spills
The rain came in reams
Saturating, filling streams

Silver forks they dart and dance
Flashing lights the hills enhance
Thor  is random with his throws
As all around soaks and grows

From the window, sit and gaze
At mother nature as she plays
At times soft, then shows her might
In thought am safe this stormy night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 2/23/2010 6:45:00 AM
Loved it!
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Date: 2/22/2010 4:58:00 PM
We are expecting that severe downpour of rain tomorrow.. and also Thor the god of thunder.. visual and vivid Daniel.. and I do luv rain.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/21/2010 3:14:00 AM
The last line is soothing. Keep the expressive and creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/21/2010 1:37:00 AM
Im looking out..to be somewhere safe,,in this very stormy night..beautiful Daniel,your words give the reader comfort and hope even in the worst of storms..Charma
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