Erik Savage Poet Couplet

Looking Glass

In the looking glass I see
A stranger there or is it me
Curly hair and pale blue eyes
An honest face or a disguise
To hide the hollowness inside
No life there yet still alive
Not decayed but never filled
Moving on by act of will
Looking for a way to breach
This glass that keeps us out of reach
Which side of the glass am I
PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE I hoarsely cry
If you walk away from me
Will I simply cease to be?

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Stephen Ferrett June 1, 2017 at 7:23 AM Nice Shari I have a poem called My Life is becoming a Black Hole - Similar parallels thanks for sharing - Steve

Stephen Ferrett June 1, 2017 at 4:14 AM Hi Erik. I really like this it is along the lines of a poem that I am writing at the moment called " I have lost my Aura". Check it out soon it should be ready next week some time - Thanks for sharing. Steve