Looking Down

As I look down                                                                                                                    I see the bow that bridges heaven, and overtops the trees                                              as I fly over the town.
                                                                                                                                            I feel a soft and cool breeze on my face                                                                              now I am reaching the pearly gates                                                                                    who do I see but my long lost friends and Grace.    
                                                                                                                                            A smile and a kiss from each I receive                                                                              now I have found true happiness                                                                                      now off to get my angel wings I believe.      
                                                                                                                                            so we can go and sing heavenly songs                                                                              maybe I should explore my new home                                                                               I feel like a child that needs to belong.     
                                                                                                                                            I did not know heaven would be like this                                                                          glad I was good with a smile and never a frown                                                                  my heart is full of amazing bliss.

Date Written: 3/8/2020                                                                                                         I used 1. The bow that bridges heaven, and overtops the trees
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Date: 3/8/2020 8:14:00 PM
Your poem is wondrous and inspiring, Paula. Beautiful emotion is conveyed through your lovely imagery. Warmest wishes for you and best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/9/2020 9:58:00 AM
Thank You, for reading, writing, kind words & best wishes. I love to hear from other writers. Have a wonderful day & week..............
Date: 3/8/2020 8:02:00 PM
wonderful write Paula... best wishes in the contest... hugs
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Date: 3/9/2020 9:56:00 AM
Thank You, for your note & best wishes. Have A wonderful day & week with hugs............
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