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You cry,but bring
no mournful look;
      Will not My brook
cool your brow?
      Will not My joy
pour out from you..
       tomorrow..if not now!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 1, 2012 at 3:15 AM
Good poem Brian.Congrats on your win.
K. Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 11:36 PM
This flowed quite well for me, Brian! It has a certain sadness to it but still very eloquently written! Super congrats on your win!
Brown Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Congratulations on your super win today in "Nikko's" contest Brian Strand. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:59 AM
Good one, Congratulations Brian x
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December 15, 2011 at 5:56 AM
enjoyed the smooth poetic verse!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 4:49 AM
Excellent x
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