Look Up

If I look at you and you look at me
Will we venture to find the logic between
A stolen look sought with dreamers luck
Will we we look again 
Will we get stuck
Looking
Quick look away your look will catch up
Your look will be caught 
On the eyes that you saught
And you must decide what do with that look
Will you look again or just look away
Looking makes looking a wonderful play

lifelovepeoplei do not know?

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Beata Agustin

November 30, 2025 at 11:58 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.