Look Out

To seek and never find,life -the tragedy of living; To see and never find,love -the tragedy of being; To seek and never find,faith -the tragedy of after-life; To live and never find,art- to live life without seeing; To live life sans poetry, with one-dimensional sight, without imagination- life exists in black and white. Believe,emote and desire too soon,this life expires.

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Audrey Haick

Date: 3/27/2010 1:46:00 PM

An exceptional poem Brian..but then yours always are...insightful, always..Thank you. Goes to my favs today.. Peace, Audrey

David Byrne

Date: 3/27/2010 10:19:00 AM

well as they say "Seek not and you will find".

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 3/27/2010 9:08:00 AM

so true nice write loved it faleshia

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/27/2010 8:08:00 AM

For some, a whole life spent, perhaps, without the joy of what a blessing we have been given. To make the most of each day that has been this gift to us. Lovely Kyrielle

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/27/2010 6:58:00 AM

Another excellent expression and of course a definite fav for me.. every line is very true and to live life sans poetry ..the very best to make the reader sit up and think again.. an immense write Brian..luv.. Linda-Marie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2010 6:03:00 AM

Ahh! But for those that believe forever will the good that we learn, love, understand,etc. goes on with us...Very thought inspiring write..Keep the creative and thought provoking writes coming forth..Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/27/2010 4:51:00 AM

I feel sorry for poeple who are color blind, don't you?

Linda Witt-King

Date: 3/27/2010 12:53:00 AM

A good reminder, Brian, and an excellent write. Thank you for that.