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Look Not At Form

Look not at form but soul within
All that is, is God’s light
Cave of heart’s open, go therein
Feel heightened bliss delight

Know there is no ‘other’
Each soul is our brother
Blessed by Divine Mother

Effuse love warm
Look not at form

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Krishnanand Guptar Date: 9/13/2023 8:52:00 AM Nice message conveyed in a succinct artistic way. Would this message stick deep in the heart and soul of many readers and beyond. Congratulations on your POD. Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/13/2023 9:13:00 AM Thank you, KG ~ am delighted these words resonate

Sand Blown Date: 8/26/2023 10:10:00 AM ....nice write....see from within...any form ....so the world be a recipe form-u-love... .....stan Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/26/2023 5:55:00 PM Knowing the dweller of each heart is the essence of God, crystallised in form

Hiya Sharma Date: 8/26/2023 9:03:00 AM Such a truthful and uplifting poem this is, the form doesn't matter, what matters and holds importance is the honesty of the heart which is pure in its mystical ambience, blessed by the God.. This is a beautiful message, that above all, we are children of the Almighty, tied together by invisible threads for eternity.. We are one together.. :) Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/26/2023 9:19:00 AM Yes, all is one and The one is in all.

Ink Empress Date: 8/26/2023 4:51:00 AM Look not at a form, but within, yes thats a very deep and touching reminder, and i love how you’ve also reminded us all that we are equals in such beautiful cadence: those rhymes are captivating and this poem is uplifting! Loved this. I need to try this form though: never heard of it Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 8/26/2023 6:32:00 AM So it is a quatrain, tercet and a couplet? Ah i would love to try this will fave this so i can have a look later Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/26/2023 4:55:00 AM First stanza is a quatrain with 8-6-8-6 syllable count in end rhyme abab + Followed by 6-6-6 syllable count tercet, end rhyme ccc + Concluded by an equal syllable count rhyming couplet using refrain (any length as of poet’s choice) beginning with the first word (or words) of the first line, as the last line of the poem The refrain (last line of poem) is also the poem title

Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/26/2023 4:40:00 AM Poetry form: Quietus Login to Reply