Look Into the Skies

Is it that the world is so cold you must be alone
Could it be a sign on the road
Yield to self-control 
And if I wanted a kiss
Would you put me on a little black list
As the sun sets in a valley of rust
Is this the end of us?

All the rivers overflow and the deserts are cold
This piece of heaven so sacred and pure
Look into the skies it's yours

The twisted piece of the puzzle fits
My last good trip
The passion to broad to explore
Help me open my doors

And if the people you once dismissed
Try to sell you some bliss
I am one cause God said so
Don't put me in a righteous role

All the rivers overflow
And the deserts are cold 
This piece of heaven so sacred and pure
Look into the skies it's yours

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/16/2015 12:11:00 AM
Jeffrey, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/13/2015 7:52:00 PM
A lot of truth here! Congrad's on Your Win Light & Love
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Date: 2/13/2015 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Jeffrey, a 7. Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/13/2015 2:15:00 PM
Beautifully penned many congrats:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 2/12/2015 9:22:00 PM
Jeffry, nice upbeat end to this poem, congratulations on your win, thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 8/28/2014 3:14:00 PM
Jeffrey, I'd never put you on a little black list...nice poem...Noelle
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Jeffrey Bovee
Date: 8/28/2014 3:39:00 PM
Thank u, very cool
Date: 5/26/2014 10:05:00 PM
This is a quality write. I could see and feel the emotion and understand the anguish too!!! Bravo and bravo!!!!!! I really like this write......
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