Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Rhyme

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Look Into My Eyes - Triplet Poetry

(Triplet poetry~ 


When I see your smile my troubles go ‘way 
Take my hand since you already have my heart 
And for a long time I gave you my love too. 

No other love like yours I've ever really known 
Come with me and never let's us be apart 
Your love's fire fed my heart and made it grown. 

Through life we'll journey this road together 
And all my love I'll give to you alone 
Just to keep and to cherish you forever. 

And my heart and love I trust you to keep 
Always closely to your own heart and soul 
Look into my eyes see my love for you so deep. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014 

October,23,2014

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Skat A June 2, 2015 at 11:39 PM DORIAN, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Ravi Sathasivam October 27, 2014 at 4:19 AM Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs Dorian Petersen Potter February 22, 2015 at 9:00 PM Thank you so kindly, Ravi,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Eve Roper October 26, 2014 at 6:16 PM Dorian, so much love in this write a love for their soul mate. :) love and hugs eve Dorian Petersen Potter February 22, 2015 at 8:58 PM Thank you so kindly ,Eve,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Cherl Dunn October 26, 2014 at 3:15 PM Dorian this is a whole some work of passion, devotional love, enjoyed it alot, cheri Dorian Petersen Potter February 22, 2015 at 8:57 PM Thank you so kindly ,Cheri,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Sara Kendrick October 24, 2014 at 1:27 PM Ahh!! Romantic lines that you have penned..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Dorian Petersen Potter February 22, 2015 at 8:57 PM Thank you so kindly ,Sara,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Demetrios Trifiatis October 24, 2014 at 6:48 AM A very romantic and tender poem promising love eternal in a unique inspiring way, dear Dorian! Dorian Petersen Potter February 22, 2015 at 8:56 PM Thank you so kindly ,Demetrios,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)D

M. L. Kiser October 23, 2014 at 5:35 PM Sweet, heartfelt and from the center of your being...I am sure that someone appreciates it. Dorian Petersen Potter February 22, 2015 at 8:55 PM Thank you so kindly ,M.L. Kiser,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)D.

Liam Mcdaid October 23, 2014 at 3:02 PM dazzling piece of writing dorian Dorian Petersen Potter February 22, 2015 at 8:54 PM Thank you so kindly, Liam ,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xoxox D

Sandra Haight October 23, 2014 at 7:35 AM Dorian, this is such a beautiful poem from your heart that is so wonderfully expressed. Hugs, Sandra Dorian Petersen Potter February 22, 2015 at 8:54 PM Thank you so kindly, Sandra,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Sandip Goswami October 23, 2014 at 5:33 AM Lovely penned...Soft, warmth and innocent love...Best to you... Dorian Petersen Potter February 22, 2015 at 8:53 PM Thank you so kindly, Sandip,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 23, 2014 at 3:24 AM - Oh .... this is really beautiful Dorian - real love deeply from your heart and soul !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Dorian Petersen Potter February 22, 2015 at 8:52 PM Thank you so kindly, Anne- Lise,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D