Look For Me Now

I needed you and i never knew
as part of myself lovely and true
we were the collision
of wonderous pain and love

look for me now 
as i swim upstream
losing you and all to your dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 29, 2010 at 10:28 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shawn. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 4:05 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... enjoyed your creative write..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Murphy Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 3:08 PM
very nice write and welcome to poetry soup faleshia
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April 28, 2010 at 2:18 PM
nice one , swim away,..p.d.
Kendrick Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 12:18 PM
Interesting Dear John write...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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