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Look Closely At Me

look closely at me, what do you see? do you see the me i see? do you see the hurt and pain, look into my eyes, do you see the despair... the torment that is lurking there, or do you see the pasted smile, i've learned to maintain when all the while i'm dying inside i'm crying out to be free from my demons to live to love to simply take a deep breath where did the joy go where did my dreams go where is my peace my hope look into my eyes do you see the scream hidden there crying out for someone to care look closely at me...what do you see.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/6/2016 1:01:00 AM
JACKIE, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ** SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:06:00 AM
jackie comeaux, nice to see this one again. linda
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Date: 7/9/2010 8:45:00 AM
deep write,, of course people don't see what deep scars we hold but we see ourselves clearly..P.D.
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